Looks like an amazing game based on what everyone is saying in the comments, but I am having issues with installing it on my android phone... And yes, I have "install from unknown sources" turned on, and well over a gig of space for it. So, why is it still not installing?
I am playing the Game and enjoying it mostly but I kind of have a couple of issues..
The scenes where people are talking are sometimes way too long.. specially the first conversation Between Jason and Tom and the office scene .. I think shorter scene as prologue will make the Game move much faster and also having to click through unnecessary conversations makes people ( or at least myself :) ) get impatient and then try to skip faster and miss important parts of the story , specially the boxes where we have to make decisions ..you can get the situation sorted in far fewer Cgs and words..
Having a separate CG just for an arm or head movement seems unnecessary. also this will make the Game file a little smaller which always helpful when downloading :)
And why are there so many Black screens and Blank conversation windows to click through ? is that a bug ?
And wording of the conversations are pretty bad.. sorry but they are.. the conversations do not flow smoothly and do not sound like a normal conversation. If English is not your native language may I suggest finding someone to do a nice translation for you ?
I don`t mean to be mean, I just wanted to point out some stuff that jumped out at me while playing.. I do like the Game and look forward to playing a lot more..
First of all I want to thank you for taking the time and the desire to review my game. Unfortunately, I rarely get reviews.
I'll try to answer your questions chronologically:
1. The first part of the game I started to develop it sometime around July. I had never written a single line of code before, nor had I used a 3D rendering program. I literally had no idea what I was doing. “Day 1“ went through a few reworks but still not what l want. I am currently working hard on day 3 and i wish in the next two weeks to finish it. After that I think to make a massive rework of day 1 and day 2, with more scenes and more clear dialog.
2. About too many limb and head movements... the reason is because I want the game to be a little more interactive. In real life people talk with their hands, shake their heads, etc. I've never liked visual novels because they were too static. I wanted to move mine a little.
3. Yes, you are right that english is not my native language. ;) I still can't find a translator because the game is a hobby project and I don't have the money to find an editor / translator.
With final words I would also like to ask you to check Day 2 and give your opinion. In my opinion it is much better than day 1, but any opinion and advice is welcome.
Thank you for your time and advices. They make my game better.
Have you fixed the missing image 6 in the Mac version of day 2? The game will never advance because the mother in not in the bedroom after the yelling in the living room.
Thanks for the interest, but no, I didn't fix it yet. When you wrote me about this last week, I try to search in code for this error, but the game run fine on my rig. I can't check the MAC version because I'm a PC user.
Maybe the problem is that MAC version is 2.0.0, but I can not be sure. This days I'll just make a new release and put the version here and tap you a message to download it form the link.
Sure, just let me know. Since most VN under Renpy probably work the same, it could be as simple as making sure that image 6 is actually in the program and/or has the correct pointer to its location.
Hello friends. First of all, I would like to express my gratitude that my game is of interest to you.
I just want to add that I notice that DAY 2 is downloaded twice more than DAY 1. The game starts chronologically from DAY 1. You may not fully understand the idea if you only play Day 2. :)
Further clarification: DAY 1 is worse than DAY 2 because six months ago I was still very inexperienced in game developing. If you have the patience and tolerance for some of my mistakes I am sure you will have a great time with my visual novella. :)
Thank you very much.
EDIT: Now I work hardly on DAY 3 and when I publish the update, I will remake a DAY1, DAY2 and DAY3 in one pretty big NONbuggy release.
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Looks like an amazing game based on what everyone is saying in the comments, but I am having issues with installing it on my android phone... And yes, I have "install from unknown sources" turned on, and well over a gig of space for it. So, why is it still not installing?
I am playing the Game and enjoying it mostly but I kind of have a couple of issues..
The scenes where people are talking are sometimes way too long.. specially the first conversation Between Jason and Tom and the office scene .. I think shorter scene as prologue will make the Game move much faster and also having to click through unnecessary conversations makes people ( or at least myself :) ) get impatient and then try to skip faster and miss important parts of the story , specially the boxes where we have to make decisions ..you can get the situation sorted in far fewer Cgs and words..
Having a separate CG just for an arm or head movement seems unnecessary. also this will make the Game file a little smaller which always helpful when downloading :)
And why are there so many Black screens and Blank conversation windows to click through ? is that a bug ?
And wording of the conversations are pretty bad.. sorry but they are.. the conversations do not flow smoothly and do not sound like a normal conversation. If English is not your native language may I suggest finding someone to do a nice translation for you ?
I don`t mean to be mean, I just wanted to point out some stuff that jumped out at me while playing.. I do like the Game and look forward to playing a lot more..
Thank you
First of all I want to thank you for taking the time and the desire to review my game. Unfortunately, I rarely get reviews.
I'll try to answer your questions chronologically:
1. The first part of the game I started to develop it sometime around July. I had never written a single line of code before, nor had I used a 3D rendering program. I literally had no idea what I was doing. “Day 1“ went through a few reworks but still not what l want. I am currently working hard on day 3 and i wish in the next two weeks to finish it. After that I think to make a massive rework of day 1 and day 2, with more scenes and more clear dialog.
2. About too many limb and head movements... the reason is because I want the game to be a little more interactive. In real life people talk with their hands, shake their heads, etc. I've never liked visual novels because they were too static. I wanted to move mine a little.
3. Yes, you are right that english is not my native language. ;) I still can't find a translator because the game is a hobby project and I don't have the money to find an editor / translator.
With final words I would also like to ask you to check Day 2 and give your opinion. In my opinion it is much better than day 1, but any opinion and advice is welcome.
Thank you for your time and advices. They make my game better.
Best regards,
Milo
I did download Day 2 and will check it out soon.. Sorry if I sounded a little harsh in my comment lol
Thank you for your hard work and please keep developing the Game..
Best of Luck :)
Have you fixed the missing image 6 in the Mac version of day 2? The game will never advance because the mother in not in the bedroom after the yelling in the living room.
Hi, friend!
Thanks for the interest, but no, I didn't fix it yet. When you wrote me about this last week, I try to search in code for this error, but the game run fine on my rig. I can't check the MAC version because I'm a PC user.
Maybe the problem is that MAC version is 2.0.0, but I can not be sure. This days I'll just make a new release and put the version here and tap you a message to download it form the link.
Thanks, friend.
Sure, just let me know. Since most VN under Renpy probably work the same, it could be as simple as making sure that image 6 is actually in the program and/or has the correct pointer to its location.
Is the android version of day 2 available?
No, sorry. I have a software issue with android dists for day2. I’ll try to change a rig for one more try next few days.
I’ll post the result here.
Check the threat :)
Thank you so much finally i've been waiting hahaha
Hello friends. First of all, I would like to express my gratitude that my game is of interest to you.
I just want to add that I notice that DAY 2 is downloaded twice more than DAY 1. The game starts chronologically from DAY 1. You may not fully understand the idea if you only play Day 2. :)
Further clarification: DAY 1 is worse than DAY 2 because six months ago I was still very inexperienced in game developing. If you have the patience and tolerance for some of my mistakes I am sure you will have a great time with my visual novella. :)
Thank you very much.
EDIT: Now I work hardly on DAY 3 and when I publish the update, I will remake a DAY1, DAY2 and DAY3 in one pretty big NONbuggy release.